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Could you pour out your soul to me?
Write a song and mean it?
(Write a song for me, your still... In my heart)
Just tear at my mind. (Rip it out)
Draw a heart and scream it!

Just take my mind from this pain.
Spewing out all this senseless emotion,
and in this, gray as the sky,
these sad eyes cry sweet meaningless devotion.
And I知 lost in this place.
But your... Still... Here... (By my side)

Goodbye my suicide
Hello sweet heartache.
Walk past all the sorrow,
through the rain, (It will pour on you again)
your in my heart,
again.
Again.

Bring me back to the place,
of neck ties and little white lies.
Your hours away from me,
(Can I just hold you)
I知 nothing without you.
(This is all lost)
And Ill ask you one more time...
But I wont cry for you.
(Don稚 break me down)
I知 breaking down...
Alone..

In these back seat breakups
and thoughts splattered on the wall,
clean me up,
(I meant everything I said)
with you and your beautiful good-byes.
Ill never feel the same again,
Ill never be the same again..

Goodbye my suicide
Hello sweet heartache.
Walk past all the sorrow,
through the rain, (It will pour on you again)
your in my heart,
again.
Again.

Good bye my suicide
(Ill never be the same again!)
Hello sweet heartache
(Ill never be the same again!)

Good bye!
©2004-2009 ~emotionalrun
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Submitted: October 5, 2004
File Size: 1.7 KB
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Comments: 14
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This is another song of mine, it means stuff to me, you know... about girls and such... yep... lol enjoi
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wow...this and your last song was really good too.
so do you just sit and think of lyrics?> or do they just coem to you?

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ah ive been listning to trust company, and over these lyrics,
i guess its the right mix, i like it dude, deep as your poetry, and the braketed work (which i guess is in the backround) gives it this layerd appeal

you should pump more of this stuff out
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thanks... yeah when it comes to writing lyrics the best stuff pops into my head say in like class or something so i write those ones down righ away and then i just sit and fit everything together at home, BBUUUTTT some of my best stuff is just poured out... i dont know why or how, but it just all comes out and fits perfectly :D thanks everyone :D oha dn yeah the braket words are in the background

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wow...amazing...i love it matt =)

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To typically emo sorry. I know this means a lot to you but as a song its AHHHH not another one, that痴 to me at least perhaps hearing it would be different, but sorry I read it and like that one person said goes great to trust company yeah to generic. Sorry I知 not trying to come down on you hard even though I知 sure it sounds like that. Anyways your poem was great.
Wow, I thoroughly enjoyed this as well. Besides nitpicky grammar-spelling (which hardly matters as it's a song), I can't see anything to complain about. Good job!
thank you :D positive comments are always the best :D

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I fell in love with a girl named autumn
Pretty sweet song. I'd love to hear it with the cords and shit but meh, take whats given to yeah,

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this deserves a definent fav ;) good work. im gonna put you on my watch

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